I liked everything about it! The wing details were amazing, yet just simple enough to match the art style of MLP:FiM that you were going for. On that topic, I feel maybe the eyes in panel 2 and 5 were a little too detailed for the artwork, and they seem to stand out a just a bit too much relative to everything else. The vibration effect you created for the 4th panel really drove home the sheer volume of that bell! I guess to make this critque up to the minimum word count, for panel 2 the head to body size ratio for Celestia is a little off. I understand that you were trying to create a 'leaning in' effect, but perhaps change the angle of the head and make the neck gradually thinner as it goes toward the body. Other than that, I really enjoyed this!
there's a party at a apartment, and two guys are drunk. one of them points to a gong, hanging on the wall. "why do you have a gong on your wall?" the drunk asks his buddy. "its not a gong, its a clock! i'll show you." the other drunk says, grabbing a mallet and slamming the gong. BONGGGG!!!! a few seconds later, a voice comes from the other side of the wall: "HEY JACKASS, ITS 3 AM!"
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